Tuesday, May 23, 2006

Wordplay

kanina nung nasa roof top ako ng college science building namin, nag-iisa ako then i was inspired to make a poem, mejo korny tsaka wala pa siya title, tulong naman oh, ano suggestion nyo... yung inspiration ko eh yung relationships that cannot be, yung tipong kailangan nyong humiwalay sa mundo para lang mas maipakita nyo ang pagmamahal nyo sa isa't isa

embraced by the breeze,
set forth to thy mountain
she waits under the cool blue sky,
let love warm each other's longing soul
indulge yourself in passion for there is no one else but you,
in your own world,
careless.
serene.
free.
hehe, korny noh? :)

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

pwedeng "my way". hehe.

tish said...

uhm...'wings' ?

/iambrew said...

i think the poem was nice...

honeyboi said...

ymir- hmmm, ill think about that. :) thanks! God bless!

tish- pwede. :) salamat. God bless.

brew-thanks dude! God bless. :)

/iambrew said...

no biggy... :þ

ALIKOY said...

hehe. wala akong maisip na title.. pero jeyem, typo error. indulge is with an "i". :) comment ako ulit when i think of a title :)

Anonymous said...

Hey! I tagged you. hehehe.

Anonymous said...

wala naman akong nakikitang kakornihan..u should be spending more time on the rooftop then!

ehjiboi said...

tatag. :p

honeyboi said...

alikoy- thankyou very much for the info, haha silly me. :) God bless.

alex-thanks! God bless.

ghe-thanks. i think i'd go there more often. :) God bless.!

mystic rouge- thanks. God bless. :)

juicypapaya said...

astig ang poem :)

keep it up :)

The King said...

nice naman ang poem, hehe. simple lang , hindi masyado cryptic. hindi kasi ako masyado mahilig sa mga poems na grabe ang symbolism eh.. :)